This is the same scene but delivered through a converesation. Use different ways to present information so your book will be more interesting.
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Placement of the antecedent · Using fewer words · Moving the story forward · Putting emotion in writing · Placing description in the action or dialogue.
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If the heroine of your novel witnesses a robbery at a convenience store, we as readers want to know how she feels. We want to know if she’s scared to death. We want to know if her hands are trembling.
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Putting Description in the Action or Dialogue
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Wordiness is a real no-no.
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description needs to be added to your story. The reader wants to feel like they’re in the same place the main character is.
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There has to be some kind of intrigue so they will be motivated to continue reading.
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Don’t forget to wrap up each and every subplot.
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Don’t let the subplot take over your story.
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You have to devise a problem that the audience can’t figure out how the characters can overcome it.